Thursday, 21 October 2010


The Three Word Wednesday words this week are: effect, immense, shimmer.

  My girlfriend's a girl of some class
  With breath not unlike mustard gas.
  The effect is immense
  But in her defence
  Her eyes shimmer like cut glass.


  1. clever and witty. But I'm not sure fabulous eyes make up for bad breath. Just saying.

  2. this is sure witty as Thom said! *giggles* too like Lynda said!

    I even like the neat rhyme u employed here!

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